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I went to take a closer look at the hole, but before I could get a look in it,
I tripped as I walked over to it.  It was like a giant slide and I slid down for about
half a minute or so.  I fell with a sudden thud and lying on my stomach, I slowly got up,
brushing off the rocks sticking to my shirt, and I was shocked at what I saw.

All over the place were little lizards, but I quickly noticed they had wings!
I quickly came to the conclusion that this was...A DRAGON NEST!  All of them just seemed
to be staring at me, every now and then I heard a little 'squee' noises they made
every now and then.  While still staring at me, they started walking towards me.  They
weren't that big, as they were only about the size of baby golden retreivers, but that
wouldn't be a problem, except there were about 15 of them and knew I wouldn't stand a chance
fighting them.

They continued silently walking to me, while I looked all around for a way out,
but from what I could tell there wasen't, unless you could...fly...  I looked down and
noticed they had stopped moving towards me as they were really close to me.  When they noticed
I was looking at them they all started making those little "scree!" noises from before,
but it seemed they all were making the noise instead of like 2 random ones.  They didn't
sound threating at all, but I was still worried as they started walking towards me again.
I backed against the wall almost, but looking behind,I saw there were a few more of them.

I was completely surrounded by the baby dragons, and then suddenly behind me
one of them jumped and was on my shoulder, it moved its head in front of mine and made
a little scree noise.  It scared the hell out of me featuring it did this all in one moment,
and I quickly then lost my balance as another one jumped on my other shoulder and another smaller
one on my head, pushing me down onto the ground again.  I Tried to get up again, but the dragons
quickly swarmed over me.  I was only able to bend my body up partialy, but that was it, as there
were to many of them walking all over me like I was just part of the ground.  All of them
seemed to be inspecting me, some grabbing my clothes and pulling on them with their teeth,
others sniffing me, and others just staring at me.  None of them seemed to have any
"murderous" intent, as they actually seemed pretty friendly.

The one who had jumped on my shoulder was now standing in front of me, sniffing
my face and still making noises.  I kept trying to get it out of my face, as I was still
nervous, but just as soon as I moved it or I moved, it would get right back in my face
like nothing had happened.  

I...started feeling odd...I felt all sweaty and my vision was getting all weird,
I couldn't tell if it was getting fuzzier or sharper.  I held my head with my left hand,
and when I did, noticed something weird...It was my ears!  I nervously felt my ears
between my fingers and noticed they weren't round, but pointy!  I also felt that they
were now nice and smooth, I guessed what they were, but decided to test my suspesion.
I looked for a near-by baby dragon, which I decided to use the one near my face and
very carefuly, moved my hand out to it.  It didn't seem to really mind as it actually
started nuzzling my hand with its snout while making friendly growling noises.  Ignoring this,
I then reached for its ear and softly felt it and my fear was confirmed, it felt JUST like
MY ear!

Now I was really scared at what was happening to me, and quickly, I started
thrashing my whole body around, kicking my feet wildly and moving my body, though not
yelling as to upset them and get bitten, trying to get out from under all the baby dragons.  
I only managed to get some off, while others of them held on tightly to me, and then the dragons
that I did manage to knock off causally walked back on top of me to where they just were.
I quickly ditched that idea as it was getting me nowhere as I never could make any progress
with it at all.

All of a sudden, I felt a tug on my pants.  I thought one of the baby dragons
was just pulling on my pants, as they had been doing that before, but that thought was
quickly subdued as just then, I heard a loud ripping sound as I looked behind me, I watched,
horrified, as a giant, dark blue, scaley tail slowly came out of my pants.  When It stopped
growing I took a closer look, well, as close as I could from where I was, and saw it had
spikes on it, there were only about 4, they were located at the very end of my tail, and slanted
so I didn't know how they'd even have much use.  And the under-side of it was a light-blue color.  

While looking at my new tail, I felt a new pain in my shoulders.  I noticed I
had 2 bumps on my back that seemed to slowly grow out.  Some of the baby dragons went up
on my back and started to sniff there, curious as to what it was.  I had a bad feeling as
to what it was, and just then, my shirt ripped open in the back, 2 light blue wings started
growing out of my back.  I watched scared, as they kept growing and growing, quickly knocking
off the baby dragons that had just stood on my back that were sniffing them.  Just then, I felt
alot lighter, as alot of the baby dragons that were even on me were knocked off when my wings
grew out of my back.  But before I was able to stand, the baby dragons were already quickly
jumping back onto me, and I was stuck under them once again.  

Angry that I had missed such a good chance  to escape, I angrily yelled "Dammit!"  but
it didn't come out as that, instead, it came out as, "Grmararrr!"  I, shocked, kept trying
to talk, but I wasen't able to!  Instead, when ever I tried to say a word it came out as
grunts and growls, I was now much more scared then I was before because now I wouldn't be able
to yell for help.  All of a sudden, I noticed something when I was growling just before, some
thing was wrong with my mouth.  I stuck my tounge out and noticed it was now much longer then
before, and it was forked at the end like the other dragons.  I also noticed I now...had fangs!
All of my teeth were now rounded at the base, and sharp at the end, this I thought may have
been another reason I couldn't talk right now.

Suddenly, some of the baby dragons made questioning noises, and looked to see where
they were doing that.  It was the ones over by my legs.  I lifted my leg slightly, noticeing
I couldn't lift it nearly as high as before and quickly saw why.  The were now animal shaped,
and now they looked like the kinds used for walking on ALL FOUR feet!  I noticed I now only had
three toes, but they each were huge, and also, I had another toe at the back of my foot,
which I noticed I was able to bend freely, as I tried to pick up a nearby rock and found it
suprisingly easy.

I was more frightend then ever.  I...knew I was turning into...a DRAGON...
Thinking I would be stronger, I tried my old plan of thrashing about my body, but the
moment I started, I was forced to stop.  My body was too sore from changing so drastically,
that the moment I even hit the ground once with any part of my body, I felt searing pain
throughout my body, and I had to stop.  Now the dragons once again started making questioning
nosies, though I didn't even wish to know, I found myself once again looking at what was now
happening, this time...it was my arms and hands!  I noticed dark-blue scales were now growing
all over my arms, and they were also getting very musucalar, as I felt my muscles expanding and
was sure I was gonna be much stronger now, but I was more concerned about by hands, as once the
scales reached them, they started changing like the rest of my body.  I saw as my pinky finger
and second-most right finger join together as one, leaving me with only four fingers now, and
I watched as my finger nails grew longer and longer, growing sharper in the progress.  Then,
my nails moved to the ends of my fingers from the top, and now were no longer finger nails,
but CLAWS.  

Suddenly, the baby dragons all stopped making noises.  They were all staring at me,
quietly, and just sat where they were standing.  I then knew why they were, I felt it as I
slowly was growing four long horns on my head, and scales were now up to my neck, already had
they covered the rest of my body.  Suddenly, I felt a killer pain spread throughout my face,
I saw my nose at it seemed to rise up, slowly changing into a upturned dragon's nose as it
connected down my face closer to my mouth and I soon realized why.  

I KNEW what was gonna happen next and wanted to do ANYTHING to prevent it, I quickly
grabbed onto my face, holding with all my might as just as I suspected, my nose started pushing
BACK at my hands.  I held on, pushing as much as I could onto my face, trying to prevent it from
growing out.  I was defintaly slowing the process, I felt my whole body shaking, as I was using
all my strength I possibly could, desprately pushing on my now forming snout.  I managed to
see all the dragons staring at me, many looking at each other questioningly, and others just
curiously looking at me.  This didn't last long as I ran out of energy, I wasen't able to keep
it up, as my hands got seperated as my new dragon snout flew through my hands.

I...felt my whole body shaking...it was from pure FEAR.  The baby dragons slowly
got off of my body, except the one near my face as it as still sitting on my shoulder,
and grouping all together, sat down in a corner of the cave room, and just looked at me silently.  I slowly stood up, noticing
I now naturally got up on all four of my feet.  I now stood like an animal, with my wings
folded on my back like the other baby dragons often walked around with their wings like, except
some of them who couldn't use their wings that well.  But if my wings were spread out, they were
huge and would probably scrape against the walls of the room.  I wasen't that much bigger than
I had been, only about a foot taller now, execpt now I was really musular, so that was probably
why I was so tall now.  I noticed I was a Dark-blueish color from my new scales, and my
underbelly scales were all overlapped, and were a more lightish blue color that went all the way
till the under end of my tail, which was about 3 feet long, and I seemed to randomly move it
around, though I felt full control of it.  I then noticed the baby dragon was still on my
shoulder and it noticed when I finally looked at it.  It...actually kinda looked like what I
did, just much smaller, with its colors the same, and also had my spikey-shaped snout, as all
these dragons were only about a foot tall as they were quite young and I seemed to tower over
them, but not too much, only by about 5 feet or so.

The baby dragon then looked quite happy at what I looked like now, as it made happy
growling noises and nuzzled my large snout with its small one.  I was then slowly approached
by the other baby dragons, their stares quickly changed into very friendly looking ones, as
they too made alot of commotion, all of them going up to me and acting all friendly.  I noticed
they all did these funny things that seemed like they wanted to play with me.  I quickly found
myself doing just that, letting them climb all over me, as they just ran all over the place,
some were examining me some more from up here, and some were even playfuly sliding down my tail,
which I quickly arched it so they could more easily.  And the one dragon that was on my
shoulder seemed to have vanished, but just when I looked for it, I just then noticed it was
now on top of my head, hanging onto two of my horns and playing with one of my pointy, long ears.

I knew...deep down...they had planned this from the beginning.  I DID hear about how
two dragons were killed here recently, and that was the biggest reason I came here, to look
for them, when I feel down this hole.  It all added up and I somehow knew...that these were
actually THOSE two dragon's babies.  I also seemed to know that these dragons...considered
me their dad now, I don't know why, but I just seem to know.

It may be strange...and I may never know why, but...I wasen't mad at them...I didn't
even feel a bit of anger at all, even though it was their fault I was now a dragon.  I must
have felt bad for them, not having any parents, and knew if I DID leave, they probably wouldn't
survive on their own.
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-Unfinished-
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Story I wrote in 04', Uploaded per request....yes its horrible, But ah well~ It was one of my first so.. =x
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:iconblackout901:
Dude this story is awesome its very well detailed and written
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:iconsiggihar:
did u say it was horrible to get out some different comments from people?

well, at least i like it, it's exactly that kind of story i was looking for
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:icon64bitdragon:
horrible? no this is good better than i could do
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:iconmachdraco22:
Wow.That is AMAZING.
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!shadowdata03 Sep 6, 2012  Student Artist
Just dance qualifier:
Perfect ( 4.5 stars )
It's very detailed and nice.
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~SpiralWillow Aug 26, 2012  Student General Artist
I think that it's pretty good actually, perhaps you could continue it
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:iconinnerdragon0475:
HORRIBLE?come on man why would you say that. You should be proud of your work
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:icona-holo-fan-189:
really? horrible? no way is this tf horrible! +1 fave!
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:iconbardmine4:
You did a amazing job
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~KettouRyuujin Mar 12, 2012  Student Writer
This isn't horrible.

It's fantastic! I'm faving it.

And by the way, are you planning on finishing this any time soon? Just wondering.
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